man...so sleepy.....
been up all night practicing my dancing and finishing this up.
sorry for not updating recently.
I've been busy with hw, tests, schoolwork, afterschool clubs, and the like Dx
=] today, after school, I'll be trying out for the step team(a hiphop/step group) =D hope i make it?
please critique xD
I'd like to know what needs improvement. =]
second panel could've used a sound effect, like "tonk tonk" or something, for the head patting. other than that, its perfect. ^^ I still love your art... Im'a gonna try a stab at improving my art too! *runs to Pokemon anime comics im making*
edit: also, her bro is still CUTE!!! XP
Yay! This is such a cool comic--I am so favoriting! He's so cute too! ^.^ Can't wait to see more!
the brother is tall *_* I think his chest is sorta crooked
xDD
ghost the echidna:
lol!!! xDD i thought i was forgetting sumthing...it was that "pat, pat" haha ^^ ill add that
akane: thank u so very much! =]
jessica: xD yea.... lol i guess so *stares at the chest* xD
yes, it is a little tiny bit, now that i look at it.
I'm not totally familiar with the laws regarding manga/anime style, but if I have to leave a critique, it would be to make the brother's chest and torso a little more realistic, rather than just the curving lines on both sides.
But like I said, I don't know the rules, so you can disregard what I said. :-)
By the way, I love your attention to detail on the background!
i want Yume closet! T^T
this page seems perfect to me! <3
Hey, Emi-chan!
I didn't know you had a comic!
Wow...this is awesome....
for real....xD
Keep it up, yeah? =D
Love, Sa-chan
Heh... wow. He just noticed, and he lives there? Sad...
And wow do I wish that your character was real and had real designs like that...! He's lucky that he can just go to her an ask her for an out-fit and she's got awesome ones on hand!
Really not lolita.
Nice drawings.
But god.
NOT LOLITA.
You fail.
its so good!! i really like what you have so far, and i realize how long and how much work these things take XD
good JOB!! XD
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