Heart's Belonging _11

posted October 4th, 2006, 7:30 pm


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October 4th, 2006, 5:46 am

ShirahataEmi

x.o....

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man...so sleepy.....
been up all night practicing my dancing and finishing this up.
sorry for not updating recently.
I've been busy with hw, tests, schoolwork, afterschool clubs, and the like Dx
=] today, after school, I'll be trying out for the step team(a hiphop/step group) =D hope i make it?

please critique xD
I'd like to know what needs improvement. =]

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October 4th, 2006, 7:34 pm

Ghost the Echidna

OMIGAHHHHH UPDAAAAATE

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second panel could've used a sound effect, like "tonk tonk" or something, for the head patting. other than that, its perfect. ^^ I still love your art... Im'a gonna try a stab at improving my art too! *runs to Pokemon anime comics im making*
edit: also, her bro is still CUTE!!! XP

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October 4th, 2006, 8:07 pm

Akane

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Yay! This is such a cool comic--I am so favoriting! He's so cute too! ^.^ Can't wait to see more!

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October 5th, 2006, 5:50 am

Jessica94

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the brother is tall *_* I think his chest is sorta crooked

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October 5th, 2006, 7:26 am

ShirahataEmi

^^

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xDD
ghost the echidna:
lol!!! xDD i thought i was forgetting sumthing...it was that "pat, pat" haha ^^ ill add that

akane: thank u so very much! =]

jessica: xD yea.... lol i guess so *stares at the chest* xD

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October 5th, 2006, 9:50 pm

Ghost the Echidna

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yes, it is a little tiny bit, now that i look at it.

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October 6th, 2006, 11:14 am

roofpig (Guest)

Rock on

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I'm not totally familiar with the laws regarding manga/anime style, but if I have to leave a critique, it would be to make the brother's chest and torso a little more realistic, rather than just the curving lines on both sides.

But like I said, I don't know the rules, so you can disregard what I said. :-)

By the way, I love your attention to detail on the background!

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October 6th, 2006, 9:23 pm

Sidheprincezzz

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i want Yume closet! T^T
this page seems perfect to me! <3

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October 15th, 2006, 3:32 pm

Sasuke (Guest)

hey!

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Hey, Emi-chan!
I didn't know you had a comic!
Wow...this is awesome....
for real....xD
Keep it up, yeah? =D

Love, Sa-chan

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November 1st, 2006, 6:52 am

Manga_Freak

really good

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please update i like this comic a lot

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November 1st, 2006, 5:55 pm

crowgirl (Guest)

><******

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love, love, (spazzzzzzz)(twitch)

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November 5th, 2006, 12:28 am

Reiji

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Heh... wow. He just noticed, and he lives there? Sad...

And wow do I wish that your character was real and had real designs like that...! He's lucky that he can just go to her an ask her for an out-fit and she's got awesome ones on hand!

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November 12th, 2006, 7:18 pm

that girl who hates you (Guest)

WTF.

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Really not lolita.
Nice drawings.
But god.
NOT LOLITA.
You fail.

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November 23rd, 2006, 12:23 pm

lodonXDD (Guest)

woahwoahwoah

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its so good!! i really like what you have so far, and i realize how long and how much work these things take XD

good JOB!! XD

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